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[lixi2007] 【左手上天堂 右手下地狱】续集 114

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This is one of the best novels of romance talking about devoted love that most of the time cathes the tears of the readers.

We do have sex descriptions in this story. But unlike the other stories of the similar nature, the descriptions give us a soothing feeling of naturalness and comfort. The other novels may have lots of brutal and exposed sex actions, but this writer has skillfully presented his characters' love making in a very natural way which has made the story more attractive.

What has impressed us most is the detailed descriptions of the feelings of the male character when he makes love with the girl he loves so much. Many adult story writers, when they come to the descriptions of love making, they always expose how strong and how big the male organ his character possesses. He can keep on making love on and on, ejaculations after ejaculations without any stop. He is the hero conquering all the opposite sex.

But this writer does not write in the way mostly adopted by the other novelists. He focussess in the descriptions of the actions and movements once the male organ has entered the vagina. We can never see how the sex muscle respose to the insertion of the hard organ except the facial expressions to the excitement. But this writer has lead us into the vagina to see how the muscle of the vagina contracts and secretes juices for every stroke. Such a depition of the sex act has become more real and more sexually arousing.

The devotion of love of the male character looks like "Romeo and Juliet". He loves the girl so much  that he is ready to sacrifice anything for her. All these feelings are presented by how he gives the tenderness to the girl, how he prepares to make the registration and how panic and crazy when he senses something may have gone wrong with his girl friend. The tight and suffocating atmosphere are very successfully described by the writer by  using words carrying the meanings of hastiness. It is so successful that all the readers are attrated into the world of the character and feel as worried as the male character. The panic, coupled with sweating on his face, clearly presented in front of us how he has suffered for fear of losing his girl friend.

What makes this story even more attractive is the female character's physical weakness - she is a crippled girl. She has to sit on the chair may be for the rest of the life. Yet she is lovely and as tame as rabbit that make us want to share her tenderness and purity. She is not complete physically, but her love to the man she loves is complete and unique. Her devotions to love is as strong as her boy friend.

This is a wonderful story which is highly recommended. I hope this romantic story will not end with a tragedy because the topic of this novel has given us a very unpleasant feeling - heaven and hell.
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